Change 32927
SDP_Guide.Unix.adoc: Proofread and fix typos, grammar, and structural errors
Corrections include:
- Fix numerous typos: straightforwad, availabile, datbase, somehwere, tradtional,
traditioanl, recocvery, backlup, checkpionts, offlien_db, retetion (x4), Packakge,
HxServerLoccks, attemps, wold, sdp_instal.cfg, Addition (heading)
- Fix doubled words: "the the", "has has", "per the per the", "in in", "you have have"
- Fix subject-verb agreement: "Perforce recommend" -> "recommends"
- Fix possessives: "it's own" -> "its own", "Servers's" -> "Server's"
- Fix missing/wrong words: "instructions of" -> "for", "assets the must" -> "that must",
"introduction if" -> "of", "core the the" -> "core of the", "very few months" ->
"every few months", "logs on the" -> "logs can be placed on the", etc.
- Fix wrong word: "filter" -> "filer" (smart filer/NetApp reference)
- Fix comment in SSL code block: "## Stop" -> "## Start" for systemctl start command
- Fix "cd" used instead of calling configure_new_server.sh directly
- Fix "suite" -> "suit" (customize to suit)
- Fix colon -> period: "as the `root` user: Repeat" -> "user. Repeat"
- Fix "run a s `root`" -> "run as `root`"
- Fix incomplete table entry for sdp_info.sh
- Fix script name typo: "recovered_edge.sh" -> "recover_edge.sh"
- Fix "It it is up" -> "If it is up"
- Fix mismatched parenthesis in `ro` replica type description
- Fix "being are of" -> "being aware of"
- Fix missing space: "you're on.The" -> "you're on. The"
- Fix "that valid to reference" -> "that is valid to reference"
- Fix "we strong advise" -> "we strongly advise"
- Fix "but the are not" -> "but they are not"
- Fix "a client programs connect" -> "client programs connect"
- Fix "this avoids" -> "This avoids" (sentence start)
- Fix stray period: "master-commit. server" -> "master-commit server"
- Fix "will mot have" -> "will not have"
- Fix "Howeve,r" -> "However,"
- Fix "required from other kinds" -> "required for other kinds"
- Fix duplicate rm command in code block: "rm x rm y" -> "rm x y"
- Fix usage line: missing "<" before P4_ARCHIVE_TEXT parameter
- Fix broken shell variable: "$INSTANCE}" -> "${INSTANCE}"
- Fix awkward GUID phrasing for clarity
- Fix "Some design of goals" -> "Some design goals of"
- Remove two duplicate recovery scenario tables (kept the best-formatted one and improved it)
Corrections include:
- Fix numerous typos: straightforwad, availabile, datbase, somehwere, tradtional,
traditioanl, recocvery, backlup, checkpionts, offlien_db, retetion (x4), Packakge,
HxServerLoccks, attemps, wold, sdp_instal.cfg, Addition (heading)
- Fix doubled words: "the the", "has has", "per the per the", "in in", "you have have"
- Fix subject-verb agreement: "Perforce recommend" -> "recommends"
- Fix possessives: "it's own" -> "its own", "Servers's" -> "Server's"
- Fix missing/wrong words: "instructions of" -> "for", "assets the must" -> "that must",
"introduction if" -> "of", "core the the" -> "core of the", "very few months" ->
"every few months", "logs on the" -> "logs can be placed on the", etc.
- Fix wrong word: "filter" -> "filer" (smart filer/NetApp reference)
- Fix comment in SSL code block: "## Stop" -> "## Start" for systemctl start command
- Fix "cd" used instead of calling configure_new_server.sh directly
- Fix "suite" -> "suit" (customize to suit)
- Fix colon -> period: "as the `root` user: Repeat" -> "user. Repeat"
- Fix "run a s `root`" -> "run as `root`"
- Fix incomplete table entry for sdp_info.sh
- Fix script name typo: "recovered_edge.sh" -> "recover_edge.sh"
- Fix "It it is up" -> "If it is up"
- Fix mismatched parenthesis in `ro` replica type description
- Fix "being are of" -> "being aware of"
- Fix missing space: "you're on.The" -> "you're on. The"
- Fix "that valid to reference" -> "that is valid to reference"
- Fix "we strong advise" -> "we strongly advise"
- Fix "but the are not" -> "but they are not"
- Fix "a client programs connect" -> "client programs connect"
- Fix "this avoids" -> "This avoids" (sentence start)
- Fix stray period: "master-commit. server" -> "master-commit server"
- Fix "will mot have" -> "will not have"
- Fix "Howeve,r" -> "However,"
- Fix "required from other kinds" -> "required for other kinds"
- Fix duplicate rm command in code block: "rm x rm y" -> "rm x y"
- Fix usage line: missing "<" before P4_ARCHIVE_TEXT parameter
- Fix broken shell variable: "$INSTANCE}" -> "${INSTANCE}"
- Fix awkward GUID phrasing for clarity
- Fix "Some design of goals" -> "Some design goals of"
- Remove two duplicate recovery scenario tables (kept the best-formatted one and improved it)